Amazing P2 Author

Louise in P2 wrote this lovely story at home this morning all by herself! Well done Louise!

Candy Land

One upon a time, there were two girls, called Ruby and Louise. Ruby saw a rainbow.
‘Let’s climb over it,’ said Louise.
So they climbed over the rainbow. There was a world called Candy Land.
‘Look at all the candy here, ‘said Ruby and she spotted a chocolate and cherry river.
‘Wow!’ said Louise, ‘Giant marshmallows!’
The sun started to set.
‘Come on!’ said Ruby. ‘It’s time to go home.’

By Louise, P2

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